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PostSubject: Project: Evelyn    Project: Evelyn  Icon_minitimeThu Dec 20, 2018 1:25 am

Player ID: C0nn0r
Out of Character Information
Name: Leon Bell Decker
Alias: Evelyn
Species: Human (Cyborg)
Age: True Age (17), Physical Age (26) as of Metroid: Other M
Gender: Male (Cybernetic Female Body)
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 147 lbs[/b][/b]

Appearance:
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Before his transformation into a cyborg, Leon was for all intents and purposes, a normal human being. He was a bit tall for his age, only standing at 5 feet and 10 inches. He weighed around 145 lbs and his body was toned from an extensive Spartan like training regimen. He had blue eyes and dirty blonde hair that was cut in a style that looked like it came straight from the 90's on the old Earth calander. His complexion was of a light tan and he had several scars from accidents.

After he was kidnapped by the Galactic Federation and turned into a cyborg, Leon underwent a complete makeover. The new body was that of a young human woman in her mid twenties, and it was shorter too. His new body's complexion was pale and had amber eyes. The hair style had been cropped into a spiky crop which just reached his shoulders. Its color was a subtle mix of red and black, with medium brown eyebrows. The red appears to be "pop-ish," and flashy, due to the neon color. The body was skinnier, more "leggier" then he was used to, as well as having a modest bust.

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Strengths:
  • Enhanced Conditioning
  • Advanced Combat Training
Weaknesses:
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PostSubject: Re: Project: Evelyn    Project: Evelyn  Icon_minitimeThu Dec 20, 2018 7:00 am

Seems good so far, I should say we do have a template under the rules-character rules thing if you want to use it, but if not it's cool.

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PostSubject: Re: Project: Evelyn    Project: Evelyn  Icon_minitimeSat Dec 22, 2018 12:49 pm

If there's a bunch of cybernetics in her [his] body, why is s/he less weighty than when s/he was a normal human?

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PostSubject: Re: Project: Evelyn    Project: Evelyn  Icon_minitimeSat Dec 22, 2018 1:26 pm

It looks like they got slightly heavier after getting turned into a cyborg actually. I read it as like a total body replacement brain transfer thing rather than cybernetic additions. At least I think that's what he was going for?

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PostSubject: Re: Project: Evelyn    Project: Evelyn  Icon_minitimeSun Dec 23, 2018 4:26 pm

Okay, yeah, weighed 145 originally, read it as 150 somethin' (dyslexia sucks), but a cybernetic body would NOT weigh only 2 pounds more than a flesh and blood body. With cybernetic implants, you would be adding the weight of all the pieces, and for a complete transformation like that, you'd need a lot of pieces. A fully cybernetic body would be even MORE weighty than the huge number of implants that would go along with the fem-trans. All in all, Leon up there would be looking at a new weight of no less than, I'd say, 1,500 pounds, probably more than a ton to multiple tons depending on how cybernetic he got. Being made of out metal makes you really freaking heavy after all.

EDIT: So, looking back, I've realized that it may seem like I dislike the character, or that I'm just trying to s#!t all over it, but I'm really not. I'm just a stickler for details when it comes to robots and the like...okay, more like just a stickler for details with anything sci-fi or magical really. I think the underlying concept of this character is fine, my only gripe that isn't weight related is that the character basically only IS the underlying concept right now, it's just not finished, so I can't really make any judgement elsewise.

EDIT: In short: I'm a nitpicker.

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